tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-242743743368711015.post4387894577291636590..comments2023-09-03T05:49:16.918-07:00Comments on This Blog OF Mine: Manic MondayLarryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06086755362215081746noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-242743743368711015.post-39912138925892378932009-08-27T00:48:33.359-07:002009-08-27T00:48:33.359-07:00I would like to thank Each and every one of you fo...I would like to thank Each and every one of you for your comments I appreciate them very much they help me to write better stories Again Thanks So Much ...<br /><br /> Larry Moon aka BlueLarryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06086755362215081746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-242743743368711015.post-91177838424795822982009-08-21T13:19:22.236-07:002009-08-21T13:19:22.236-07:00I really like the black marble. I've always w...I really like the black marble. I've always wanted a dining room with a black marble floor and red walls...go figure...Ronda Levinehttp://writingresearchediting.com/blog.phpnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-242743743368711015.post-52545677604008919292009-08-20T19:13:14.384-07:002009-08-20T19:13:14.384-07:00excellent writing style
:mingling:excellent writing style<br /><br />:mingling:Indigohttp://outsidemyhead.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-242743743368711015.post-72607530149588470302009-08-17T08:33:49.660-07:002009-08-17T08:33:49.660-07:00You had me guessing as to where this was going! I ...You had me guessing as to where this was going! I am still thinking maybe something is going to happen with the client. The shower seemed like a build up to something-your descriptions were nicely done! I felt like I was there!Tiffanynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-242743743368711015.post-43880389771692670432009-08-16T18:05:42.090-07:002009-08-16T18:05:42.090-07:00I will have to admit I was lulled into thinking th...I will have to admit I was lulled into thinking that the architect was a female - your red herring of the mention of hips being the main teaser for me.<br />It served as a slap when I realized I was mistaken; forcing me to re-read the prose.<br />You worked hard at delivering several of the senses to engage the reader - which brought a solid feel to the piece.<br /><br />On my quest to try different genres each week, mine is influenced by the Cyberpunk one. http://annieevett.blogspot.com/2009/08/cold-cobblestones.htmlAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01308937047474819914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-242743743368711015.post-49340913820272888802009-08-15T00:24:44.838-07:002009-08-15T00:24:44.838-07:00nice!nice!bbwravenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08576965595906416136noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-242743743368711015.post-32829205666014230992009-08-14T21:11:48.465-07:002009-08-14T21:11:48.465-07:00I bet his client wondered why his architect was dr...I bet his client wondered why his architect was dressed so snazzy just to deliver blueprints.Chris Chartrandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09766438158698041660noreply@blogger.com