Goodbye
As the evening sun dipped below the horizon, I looked at her beautiful face. Those pure blue oval eyes melted my heart. "I'm so glad I met you, and I'm so glad you let me love you too". I opened the car door, looking her way, winked my eye at her as she sped away.
Flash Fiction Friday 55 is a story written in exactly 55 words.
it's fun exciting and definitely a challenge making sure to use no more than fifty five words and no less of course and you must read the ones of your fellow writers. Let the G-Man know if you write one GMan's Place Why Gman's? Place Cause He da Man!..
11 comments:
A beautiful but brief moment. Nicely done.
Wow! So many possibilities. So many pictures in my mind. Wonderful 55
I have finished my 55.
You’ll find it
HERE.
.
But it’s a groaner.
Awwwwwwww, don't know if this is sad...or happy. Who is losing?
My 55 is posted, if you'd like to stop by and read along with me. As always, scroll down below my Show n Tell Friday submission. Click HERE
Have a glorious weekend.
nice 55. this one left me with a few questions...more or was the dream speeding away at the end of one night. nicely played.
mine is up!
Lovely, just lovely. And sad too.
You'll find my 55 here:
Friday Flash 55 ~ Drifting.
Enjoy your weekend,
Chef Kar
Oooh I love this one. How romantic, how beautiful.lovely picture as well..
Greatest 55!!!
Is this about a one night stand or do I need to go lay down...lol. Very nicely written, great use of imagery. It's amazing how much you can say in so little words.
this could be a follow up to shadows 55!! great job!! mine is up too!!
This is a really cool 55!
Sometimes, Brief encounters can be magical!
I like this one, a lot! It could be so many things---and the title you've given it gives it that extra something.
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