Zephyr's Revenge Part # 6
55 words. It's fun exciting and definitely a challenge making sure to use no more than fifty five words and no less of course and you must read the ones of your fellow writers. Gmans Place Let the G-Man know if you write one Why Gman's? Place because he's the Man who came up with this great Idea.
Zephyr rips Xanthus' juggler vein and tears his stomach open with his sharp claws. He mutilates, bringing an end to Xanthus' plundering and killing. Zephyr feels his body beginning to return to it's human form. It's time to hide out from daybreak, he grabs the diamond earrings, he must return quickly to his lair.
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10 comments:
Wow.. for 55, full of suspense!
Diamond earring huh? Nice.
Very nice 55!
Happy Easter!
Mine is here
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shakira
That's one down - I'm sure there will be others.
I have a character called Dr. Wuulff in my Yes Man cartoon strip, coming to my blog soon.
you have set just the perfect pace...frantic in th lines with just enough movement in the over arching story. great 55. hope you have a wonderful weekend!
my 55 is up!
I look forward to your 55s...this week didn't disappoint us readers.
Now, peace for the daylight hours...or is it? Guess I gotta wait 'til next time.
Mine is posted HERE. As always, scroll down below my Friday Show n Tell to find my 55.
Have a great holiday weekend.
I love a good violent bloody revenge.
Wow! That's suspense! Can't wait for the next one.
My 55 is here if you'd like to read.
Blood Guts and Gore...My Favorite!
Excellent 55 Larry.
Thanks for being so loyal and Timely.
Thanks for visiting, thanks for playing, and have a Happy Easter, and a Kick Ass Week-End...G
Graphic. Jewelry seems very important to your characters. My 55 is HERE.
Your 55s are never boring, that's for sure!
Thanks for keeping us in weekly suspense. Happy Easter!
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