Flash Ficton 55
Opening the car door, a tender voice says, “climb in sweetie, you headed for Vegas”? He grunted as he bent down climbing into the back seat. The tune Crimson and Clover belched from the stereo. The long switch blade in his hand, he runs the blade over his thumb just itching to open her throat.
Flash Fiction Friday 55 is a story written in exactly 55 words. It's fun exciting and definitely a challenge making sure to use no more than fifty five words and no less of course and you must read the ones of your fellow writers. Let the G-Man know Gman's Place if you write one Why Gman's? Place because he's the Man who came up with this great Idea.
Flash Fiction Friday 55 is a story written in exactly 55 words. It's fun exciting and definitely a challenge making sure to use no more than fifty five words and no less of course and you must read the ones of your fellow writers. Let the G-Man know Gman's Place if you write one Why Gman's? Place because he's the Man who came up with this great Idea.
15 comments:
Yikes ~ Mama always said don't pick up hitchhikers. Guess Mama was right.
I'm up:
Friday Flash 55 ~ Sobering 55
A dark and scary 55.
Well done
I have finished my 55.
You’ll find it
HERE.
.
But it’s a groaner.
Whoa!!!
Mine's here if you scroll down a bit...Cold...but warm wishes
that is awful!! oh my gosh, great start to a horror movie!! great 55 now i want to see her get away!! i want to read more but only 55 words, no more no less!! great job!! mine is up too.
Nice Larry! Upbeat, and very seasonal!
For Halloween!
But it is a Fine 55 none the less!
Thank you for this excellent contribution, and have a Kick Ass Week-End....G
Oh! A flashy frightening one!
nicely done. suspenseful 55...ya goota watch out for the Hitcher.
mine is up!
I'm hoping she's drunk, suicidal, and about to run the car over a cliff--
;-)
I'd forgotten all about Crimson and Clover but wow it came back fast!
Gotta watch out for the guys with the duct tape and rope in the back.My 55 is HERE.
Hmmmm, are you reading the Green River Killer again? Spooky, just downright scary!!! And to think that I was stupid enough to hitch rides as a teenager, sheesh!!!
Thanks for visiting me! Make sure to leave your switchblade at home *giggle*
Now I have that tune stuck in my head...which is better than a knife to the throat. :)
Chilling...and yet I wonder what happens next?
After reading this 55 I say "Have mercy!"
I hate slasher films - can't even stand the sight of a needle. But having said that and since this is just fiction, I thought it was good. Thanks!
PG
Very creepy, and very well done! I feel like I'm right there, witnessing the whole macabre event.
Made my heart pound. That's a good thing, right? I am scared.
I'm not riding with YOU!!! Look out Stephen King......Nicely done and thanks for stopping by
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