Sweetest OF Sorrows
The tears won't stop my mind won't rest. I don't have a pulse for my hearts in your chest. Tell me it isn't real it's just a bad dream. Tell me I'm crazy and things aren't as they seem.. You are my sweetest of sorrows you always were, two weeks ago, today and even tomorrow.
55 words. It's fun exciting and definitely a challenge making sure to use no more than fifty five words and no less of course and you must read the ones of your fellow writers. Gmans Place Let the G-Man know if you write one Why Gman's? Place because he's the Man who came up with this great Idea.
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13 comments:
Nice piece. 55 words is tough. Go and take a look at blinkink.com
They do a 50 word challenge.
Regards, David.
Another winner Larry! BTW...@David: 50 words!? I'll stick with 55. LOL
I'm up right HERE
nicely done larry. i feel that...love so deep. great 55!
mine is up!
Larry My Friend, your writing is always so heartfelt.
Excellent 55.
Yes I did like this a lot.
Thanks for being such a loyal and quality contributor each and every week...You Rock!
Have a Kick Ass Week-End....G
So, so beautiful. Priceless.
Mine's HERE
Not really 'fiction' this week. You can find it by scrolling below my show n tell friday.
Well done, though heart breaking. Or is that broken?
Nice Nice.. very nice..
I like this one a lot.. Indeed Heartfelt as others expressed. That is the right one.. HeartFELT.
Thanks for visiting my 55.. because I got to read this one..
Betty Ann aka Ms. Hen.
Beautifully stated.
You packed a lot of anguish in those 55 words! Their whole relationship comes to life right there.
Awesome 55!
Very nicely done. Have a great weekend.
I especially loved "my heart's in your chest."
Nicely said!
This is my first time here (I think) and must say I love it.
great 55
Thanks for coming by!
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